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Article Errors, part 1 An article is a
little word that appears at the beginning of a noun phrase, “a,”
“an,” or “the.” “A” and “an”
indicate singular, indefinite nouns: Incorrect: My mom
says I need the haircut. Correct: My mom
says I need a haircut. “The” indicates
definite nouns: Incorrect: When you
leave your apartment, don’t forget to lock a door. Correct: When you
leave your apartment, don’t forget to lock the door. Remember that sometimes,
no article is the only correct choice. Incorrect: My
favorite class is the math. Correct: My
favorite class is math. Determiners include articles and possessive adjectives like this
or his that can appear instead of an article. Links:
Article
Errors, part 2
A vs. An Use a when a noun
is singular, count, and indefinite, and the article is followed by a
consonant sound. Use an when a noun is singular, count, and
indefinite, and the article is followed by a vowel sound. Incorrect: Do
you have an pen? Correct: Do
you have a pen? Incorrect: Do
you have a automobile? Correct: Do
you have an automobile? Remember: Consonant
and vowel refer to the pronunciation (not the spelling) of a word. A
vowel is made with the mouth open, like the sound at the beginning of ear
or at the end of happy. A consonant is made with the mouth
partially or completely obstructed, like the sound at the beginning of year
or at the end of each. When writing an unfamiliar word—a word that you
have not heard pronounced—it is always a good idea to look it up in a pronouncing
dictionary, especially when you use it with an article. Quiz:
Examples: (Write a or an
according to the rule.)
Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 8 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28
Article
Errors, part 3
Definite vs.
Indefinite
A noun, when you see or
hear it in a context, is definite or indefinite. Definite means
a specific something that is known to both the speaker/writer and
listener/reader. Indefinite means something that is not
specific or unknown to the speaker/writer or listener/reader or both. For
example, If I ask, “do you have any apples?” the word apples is
indefinite. This pair of concepts
may be the most difficult part of the determiner system, primarily because
what someone else knows or does not know is difficult to predict. Rule: Do not use the with a noun that is
indefinite—i.e., a noun that, not specific, or unknown, to the
speaker/writer, the listener/reader, or both. Incorrect: Cats
like to drink the milk. Incorrect: Can
you please take out the trash? Incorrect: In
Incorrect: Do you have the brothers and sisters? Incorrect: Did
you know that there are the tiny microorganisms that live on your skin? Incorrect: Jacob would like to visit Rule: Use the when the noun names something that is
unique for all members of the English-speaking world. (This is called general
cultural use.) Use the
when the noun names something that is unique for all members of the local
community, like your family, classmates, roommates, or town. (This is called local
use.)
Incorrect: Why
is sky blue? Incorrect: Be careful when sunbathing because sun will burn
you. Incorrect: A werewolf is a man or woman who turns into a
wolf when moon is full. Incorrect: We have to take care of earth because it sustains
us. Incorrect: Who
broke refrigerator? Incorrect: Let’s
go to UCEN for lunch. Incorrect: Do you think teacher knows I was absent? Incorrect: Susan invited Henry for a walk on beach. Rule: Use the when the noun names something that is
unique in the immediate situation. (This is called immediate situational
use.) Use the when the
noun names something that is unique in the listener/reader’s field of
perception. (This is called perceptual situational use.)
Incorrect: Don’t
go in there. Dog will bite you. Incorrect: Pass
me salt, please. Incorrect: Who
spat chewing gum on floor? Incorrect: Wow! Goalie just threw ball into referee’s face! Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 203-205 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 10 In Eye on Editing 2,
see pages 26-28 Article
Errors, part 4
Null Article Do not use an article
before proper names.
Exceptions include the
rule for proper nouns that are followed by a restrictive modifier. (Click on this link for info.) Another exception is
made for a special usage of a proper noun with a or the. (Click
on this link for info.) Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11
Rules
Article Errors, part 5
Zero Article
The “zero article”
denotes a noun that is (1) indefinite and (2) noncount or plural. Do not use a
or an when the noun is plural or noncount. Incorrect: (X) lion is not the kind of cat that makes
a good pet. Correct: A lion is not the kind of cat that makes a good
pet. (Lion is singular.) Incorrect: A cats are popular pets. Correct: (X) cats are popular pets. (Cats is
plural.) Incorrect: Lions
eat a meat. Correct: Lions eat (X) meat. (Meat is
noncount.) If an indefinite noun is
plural or noncount, you may also use the quantifier some. Use some when the speaker/writer
has an approximate amount of stuff or number of things in mind. On the other hand, use no determiner when
the intent is to define, classify, or characterize someone or
something. Correct: John and Bill are (X) teachers. (The intent is to classify, or characterize
John and Bill.) Correct: I need some stamps. (The
speaker/writer has an approximate number of stamps in mind.) Correct: Christmas and Independence Day are (X) legal holidays. (The intent is
to classify, or characterize.) Correct: Can we have some cookies? (The
speaker/writer has an approximate number of cookies in mind.) Correct: (X) penguins and emus are (X) flightless birds. (The intent
is to define, classify, or characterize.) Note: The same noun can be a count noun in one instance
and a noncount noun in another. Note:
Some noncount nouns can appear with a or an if the meaning is
“a type of.” Quiz: (Write a or Ø
according to the Rule.)
Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28 Errors with
article and quantifier
Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 7 In Eye on Editing 2,
see pages 29-30 Article Errors, part 7 Wrong use of a,
an, the, or zero article in a definition. Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28 Article Errors, part 8 For first mention, use a,
an, some, or Ø. For subsequent mention, use the. For example, when
telling a story, do not use the with nouns that name someone or
something that is being mentioned for the first time (called first
mention). Use the when
the noun names someone or something that has been mentioned before (called subsequent
mention). Example 1: There was once a crow who stole a wedge of cheese from a
kitchen window. She flew off with the cheese to a nearby tree. the fox saw what the crow had done, and
he walked over to the tree. “Oh, Mistress Crow, you have
such Ø
lovely black feathers, such Ø slender feet, such a beautiful yellow beak,
and such Ø
fine black eyes! You must have a beautiful voice. Would you please sing
for me?” the
crow felt very proud. She opened her beak and sang CAW-CAW-CAW. Of course the
cheese fell down, and the fox snatched it up and ate every
bite. Example 2: One night the fall of his freshman year, Tiger
Woods was returning to his dormitory after attending a party. He parked his car in the lot outside Stern Hall at 11:10 and
began walking toward the building when a man accosted him and held a knife to his throat. the man took a gold rope and Woods’s watch, then hit him in the jaw with the handle
of the knife, knocking him to the ground. Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28 Article Errors, part 9 Use an indefinite
noun when you make a generalization. A generalization
is a statement that can be true about the entire class of things named by a
noun. (People are strange is a generalization, but Martin is
strange is not. The word people names an entire class, while Martin
names a certain individual.) In a generalization,
three strategies are common:
Occasionally, the
is used before a singular count noun in a generalization. This usage tends to
be restricted to inventions, musical instruments, and animal species. Correct: The computer is
ubiquitous on college campuses. Correct: The guitar can be played
as a solo instrument or as part of a rhythm section. Correct: The cheetah has been
clocked at speeds of over fifty miles per hour. Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28
Article Errors, part 10 Wrong use of a,
an, the, or zero article when a noun is followed by a
restrictive modifier A restrictive modifier
is a phrase, usually starting with of, or a clause, usually starting
with that, after a noun. Often two nouns are combined in a way that
makes the first one definite, even when both of them are newly mentioned in a
text, and either of them would be indefinite if used alone. Separate: Barry Lynn was an
executive editor. Barry Lynn worked for a
magazine called Global Business. Combined: Barry Lynn was the
executive editor of a magazine called Global Business. Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28 Article Errors, part 11 Wrong use of a,
an, the, or zero article with a possessive noun Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28 Do not use the
with most abstract nouns—for example, love, life, or beauty. Incorrect: Many
students choose to major in biology because they love the nature. Correct: Many
students choose to major in biology because they love (X) nature. Incorrect: A
university education helps prepare men and women to enter the society. Correct: A
university education helps prepare men and women to enter (X) society. Correct: A few bio majors will enter careers dedicated to
protecting the environment. Links: Further In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 200-206 In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see pages 8-11 In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 28
Article
Errors, part 13
Use a or an
to mean “for each” or “per.” Examples:
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Article Errors, part 14
Do not use the with
certain other obligatory destinations like home, work, school, or church. (In Canadian and British English, this
includes the expression in hospital.) Examples: (Delete the word the
where it does not make sense according to the Rule.) Incorrect: Jeremy didn’t receive your message because he was
at the work when you called. Correct: Jeremy didn’t receive your message because he was
at (X) work when you called. Incorrect: In boarding school, we had to go to the
chapel every morning before breakfast. Correct: In boarding school, we had to go to (X)
chapel every morning before breakfast. Correct: The chapel was badly burned in the fire. Correct: Jenny took Biology credit / no credit because she
didn’t want to go to (X) lab. Correct: Francine spilled some chemical that caused a fire
in the lab.
Article Errors, part 15
Superlatives
Use the when a
noun is modified by a superlative adjective or other adjective that
signifies uniqueness. Use the with
superlative adjectives and adverbs (like most,
least, best, fastest) and in the expression the same. Incorrect: Defenselessness might be (X) longest English word whose
vowels are all the same. Correct: Defenselessness might be the longest English word
whose vowels are all the same. Incorrect: The Coca-Cola Co. made AlterNet.org’s list of (X)
14 worst corporate evildoers. Correct: The Coca-Cola Co. made AlterNet.org’s list of the
14 worst corporate evildoers. Incorrect: Ecuador is (X) only equatorial country
where the temperature can reach zero. Correct: Ecuador is the only equatorial
country where the temperature can reach zero. Incorrect: Farm work is among (X) top ten most
dangerous jobs in Note: Do not use any article
when most is a quantifier.
Do not use any article before adverbials like most of all and least
of all. Incorrect: Opportunities are
usually disguised as hard work, so the most people don’t
recognize them. Correct: Opportunities are
usually disguised as hard work, so (X) most people don’t recognize
them. [1] Incorrect: JavaScript is a powerful and versatile scripting
language designed exclusively for the World Wide Web. You can use it to
transform lackluster Web pages into dynamic, fully interactive pages with
real-time response. The best of all, JavaScript is easy
to use. Correct: JavaScript is a powerful and versatile scripting
language designed exclusively for the World Wide Web. You can use it to
transform lackluster Web pages into dynamic, fully interactive pages with
real-time response. (X) best of all, JavaScript is easy to use. [2] Incorrect: Morality is (X) best of all devices for leading mankind by the
nose. Correct: Morality is the best of all devices for leading
mankind by the nose. [3] Note: The adjectives next
and last are usually superlative, but are correctly used without the
in expressions of time like next week, next Monday, next Halloween
and last night, last Monday, and last Halloween. Do not say next day, next night,,
or last day when you mean tomorrow, tomorrow night, or yesterday. Incorrect: Colorado illegally purged
several thousand names from voter rolls in (X) last election. Correct: Colorado illegally purged several thousand names
from voter rolls in the last election. Incorrect: For $44 you can Fedex an envelope to Correct: For $44 you can Fedex an envelope to 1.
In a world marked by unacceptable health inequalities, we will emphasize
those programs that benefit some poorest and most vulnerable communities. [4] 2.
Violence is a last refuge of the incompetent. [5]
Use the when a
noun is known or implied because it is a part of some previously mentioned
whole. If, say, a typical sandwich comes with mayo, then mayo is implied. Examples: (Revise phrases so that
they use the if it makes sense according to the Rule.) the
Article Errors, part 17
Don’t use the with a noun if the noun is part
of someone’s body, or a piece of clothing or jewelry that someone is wearing,
or that someone only owns one of, like eyeglasses. Instead of the use a possessive determiner—such as my, your, his, her, our, or
their. Examples: (Revise phrases so that
they use a possessive if it makes sense according to the Rule. One of these sentences is already
correct.)
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Article Errors, part 18
Do use the with clothing or a body part that
has been touched by an outside object. Examples: (Add the where it
makes sense according to the Rule.
Otherwise, add a possessive.) 1.
You can’t sue a 2.
I touched him on
________ arm and asked if he was all right. Back
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Article Errors, part 19
Do not use the
with the names of languages or religions that have not been made definite. Do
use the when the word “language” or “religion” (or some similar noun)
is used immediately after the adjective. Incorrect: The
Spanish is spoken by over 322 million people worldwide. Correct: (X)
Spanish is spoken by over 322 million people worldwide. Correct: The Aragonese dialect of Spanish is different from the Aragonese language, according to Ethnologue. Correct: The Spanish spoken in Spain is different from South American Spanish. Incorrect: Many
groups practice the Catholicism although they have broken with
the Pope. Correct: Many groups
practice (X) Catholicism although they have broken with the Pope. Correct: Several books
give conflicting instructions in how to practice the Catholic
faith. Back
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Article Errors, part 20
Use the with
abstract adjectives that describe a class of people. (This usage is frequently seen to express the
plural of nationalities that have no other plural form.) Examples: (Add the word the
where it makes sense according to the Rule. Otherwise, write Ø.)
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They behaved stupidly and ruined environment by doing
obviously dumb things, like cutting down their forests, watching their
topsoil erode, and building cities in dry areas likely to run short of
water. |
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Correct: |
They behaved stupidly and ruined their own environment
by doing obviously dumb things, like cutting down their forests, watching
their topsoil erode, and building cities in dry areas likely to run short
of water. [11] |
Links:
Articles,
Determiners, and Quantifiers
Further
In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 202-203
In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 162
In Eye in Editing 2,
see pages 24-32
Wrong Determiner
Determiners include
articles like a and the, demonstrative adjectives like this and
these, quantifiers like some and many, and
possessive adjectives like this or his that can appear instead
of an article.
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Incorrect: |
They behaved stupidly and ruined an environment by
doing obviously dumb things, like cutting down their forests, watching
their topsoil erode, and building cities in dry areas likely to run short
of water. |
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Correct: |
They behaved stupidly and ruined their own environment
by doing obviously dumb things, like cutting down their forests, watching
their topsoil erode, and building cities in dry areas likely to run short
of water. [12] |
Links:
Articles,
Determiners, and Quantifiers
Further
In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 202-203
In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 162
In Eye in Editing 2,
see pages 24-32
Determiner
Problems, part 4
Determiners include articles like a and the,
demonstrative adjectives like this and these, quantifiers
like some and many, and possessive adjectives
like this or his that can appear instead of an article.
In English, only one
determiner can be used to modify a noun phrase.
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Incorrect: |
Diversity allows a system to “sponsor its own
fertility,” to use the Wes
Jackson’s words. (article + possessive determiner =
incorrect double determiner) |
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Correct: |
Diversity allows a system to “sponsor its own
fertility,” to use the words of Wes
Jackson. (“the words” = one determiner + noun) |
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Correct: |
Diversity allows a system to “sponsor its own
fertility,” to use Wes
Jackson’s words. (one possessive determiner + noun) [13] |
Links:
Articles,
Determiners, and Quantifiers
Further
In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 202-203
In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 162
In Eye in Editing 2,
see pages 24-32
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Links:
Articles,
Determiners, and Quantifiers
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Quantifier + of + definite
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Quantifier +
indefinite noun (without of) |
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Quantifier + of + indefinite
noun |
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Don’t use: |
Quantifier + definite
noun (without of) |
Examples:
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Many of his friends A few of the cookies |
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Many people A few cookies |
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Incorrect: |
Many of people A few of cookies |
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Incorrect: |
Some the books A few his friends |
Exceptions:
A lot of + definite noun
Links:
Articles,
Determiners, and Quantifiers
Further
In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 162
In Eye on Editing 2,
see page 29
Article error with a
quantifier
Do not use any article
when most is a quantifier.
Do not use any article before adverbials like most of all and least
of all.
Incorrect: Opportunities are
usually disguised as hard work, so the most people don’t
recognize them.
Correct: Opportunities are
usually disguised as hard work, so (X) most people don’t recognize
them. [14]
Incorrect: JavaScript is a powerful and versatile scripting language
designed exclusively for the World Wide Web. You can use it to transform
lackluster Web pages into dynamic, fully interactive pages with real-time
response. The best of all, JavaScript is easy to use.
Correct: JavaScript is a powerful and versatile scripting
language designed exclusively for the World Wide Web. You can use it to
transform lackluster Web pages into dynamic, fully interactive pages with
real-time response. (X) best of all, JavaScript is easy to use. [15]
Incorrect: Morality is (X) best of all devices for leading mankind by the
nose.
Correct: Morality is the best of all devices for leading
mankind by the nose. [16]
Links:
Articles,
Determiners, and Quantifiers
Further
In Writing Clearly:
An Editing Guide (2nd edition), see pages 201
In Read, Write, Edit:
Grammar for College Writers, see page 7
Topics:
[1] Ann
Landers, American advice columnist.
Quoted in http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Ann_Landers.
[2] “VBScript
2.0 and JavaScript 1.2: scripting is the key to interactive Web pages.” PC
Magazine v16, n11 (June 10, 1997.
[3]
Friedrich Nietzsche, German classical Scholar, Philosopher and Critic of culture. Quoted in
http://en.thinkexist.com.
[4] Lee Jong-wook, Director-General of the World Health
Organization. Quoted in http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Lee_Jong-wook.
[5] Isaac Asimov, Russian-born American author and
biochemist. Quoted in http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Violence.
[6] Adapted from “Bigger Dorm Beds,” by Mary
Beth Marklein. Gannett News Service, September 8, 2005.
http://www.thejournalnews.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20050908/LIFESTYLE01/509080384/1031.
[7] Computer-Aided
Dieting: Web Sites, Software
Can Help You Track Your Nutritional Health,” by Tara Parker-Pope.
The Wall Street Journal, Monday,
January 23, 2006. http://deseretnews.com/dn/view/0,1249,635177632,00.html
[8]
http://www.epsscentral.org/knowledgebase/articles/choosingtherightcms/view
[9] Vin Weber, speaking before the U.S. Council
on Foreign Relations, October 21, 2005.
http://www.cfr.org/publication/9083/iraq.html?breadcrumb=default
[10]
http://www.macobserver.com/article/2005/02/28.1.shtml
[11] * Source: “The Last Americans: Environmental Collapse and the End of Civilization,” by Jared Diamond. Harper's Magazine, June 2003.
[12] Source: “The Last Americans: Environmental Collapse and the End of Civilization,” by Jared Diamond. Harper's Magazine, June 2003.
[13] Adapted from: “The Oil We Eat: Following the Food Chain Back to Iraq,” by Richard Manning. Harper’s Magazine, February 2004.
[14] Ann
Landers, American advice columnist.
Quoted in http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Ann_Landers.
[15]
“VBScript 2.0 and JavaScript 1.2: scripting is the key to interactive Web
pages.” PC Magazine v16, n11 (June 10, 1997.
[16]
Friedrich Nietzsche, German classical Scholar, Philosopher and Critic of culture. Quoted in
http://en.thinkexist.com.